Poster Development

With these designs i am looking at incorporating the face into the text in order to see whether it works or not. I am thinking of making it a range of 3. One with image, one with text and one with both. So i need to experiment in all areas. This being the one where i think the design could fall apart. 

With this design the alignment just isn't right. It 

all looks a little odd. It makes the grid shape look 

a little weird. It also looks like one of those

'Have you seen this person?' Which actually

works quite well with the whole concept of

my idea. So this may be something i take

further. 

The text needs to be closer to the image as

there is too much white space. The eye is

drawn to the image -> the text below ->then

the text at the top which isn't what i want it

to work out like. 

Here i have just added the logo and

its just one more thing that the eye is

drawn to making it a little bit confusing

to the eye and not that clear as to

how it all runs together. I do like this design

but i am not sure whether it all works. The

clean crisp edges do work and it helps have

some continuity within it. 

I have shrunk everything down with this design. 

Which hasn't worked at all if anything its just

made it look like a flyer one a big poster which

is not what i wanted at all. I don't like the logo

being at the side of the info either it doesn't work.

You're eye is drawn to the face and then the

logo which works but then the surrounding

text is then made surplus to requirements. 

I switch the poster design to see what it looked like.

Immediately i don't like it not because i don't think it

works but because i think it works too closely with the

billboard design and that makes it hard to work as a range

because it makes it look like i have just shrunk it down. 

Again way too similar to the billboard design and i won't

be using this style for the posters.