On Friday we put our book and websites designs out and everyone went around and made comments on each other products. We received a variety of different comments but all constructive which was good, and telling us things we already knew which was good as well.
- 'the visual are spot on - very accessible and easy to follow'
- 'very nicely made book'
- 'great idea - Bot sure about the fold lines on the book' - dust cover we need to reprint
- 'a lot of effort has clearly gone into this, love the illustrations and idea'
- 'really well crafted book. i think it could have been brighter in terms of appealing to kids but the content is absolutely fine. nice work'
- 'well constructed book, colour could be more 'child friendly' but stories work really well, good content'
- 'think it targets audience well'
- 'the book is beautiful, but why have you put the dust cover on? it doesn't really fit and is not folded/scored well. everything else is very well delivered, good work!'
- 'love it, very nice story and drawings'
- 'really nice book - fun and easy to read - keeps pushing message and works well for kids'
- 'good design concept, could have used colour more effectively'
- 'illustrations and type and layout appropriate for audience'
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