I have altered the way the Top 10 is laid out in the last frame. It just seemed to centered, which didn't really relate to the images and type that is in the rest of the sequence.
I decided to skew it slightly, like i had with the
'channel 4 productions presents'..
I think it adds more to the piece, especially with the
altered hierarchy you instantly read 'Top 10 pirates'
and then the fictional after. This is good and intentional
because i want it to inform immediately and the fact they
are fictional is added information.
I also altered the timing so that it will hang over the last
frame with the Top 10 in it for longer. This is due to the crit i had
on Wednesday where they rightly pointed out that because it was the
title it needed a bit more time on it.
This was fairly simple to do i just edited the camera pan to happen a little
later and get to the next key frame faster.
Overall i think this looks a lot better, it now has a level of consistency.
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