This was probably one of the most helpful crits I've had this year. I really wanted to focus my feedback to my presentation boards, their images and their layout. These boards were never going to be the final boards, but i wanted some perspective on the images I have and how people thought best to represent them. Amy's feedback was particularly helpful because it really took my boards apart in a very constructive way. I will defiantly be acting on all the feedback i got, like looking out for typos and making the boards landscape.
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BOARD 1
BOARD 2
BOARD 3
BOARD 4
BOARD 5
BOARD 6
BOARD 7
BOARD 8
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Things to think about and change:
Board being landscape
Restrict the amount of image displayed
limit info
try to create grid with images
check alignment, not center aligned
Close up shots work
Appropriateness of images - are the all needed?
Re-take images
Try layouts out first
Check spelling
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